Could this article possibly be rewritten by someone who speaks English as a first language? It's a trainwreck to try and make sense out of it. I haven't played the game or I'd do it myself.
- Nope. But I commend the effort. —BLUER一番。 16:40, 7 January 2009 (UTC)
- The effort of making the page in the first place is to be commended, but if it's not readable because of massive errors in basic English, it's wasted. As I said, I'd do it myself, but I haven't played the game and while I could have a go at fixing what I could, there's also a good chance I'd mess up details from the game when trying to make sense out of it, which would defeat the purpose. ReboValence 16:55, 7 January 2009 (UTC)
I'll do the honors. I've been fixing every article on all the other Nocturne characters anyway. MomoChan 14:42, 7 April 2009 (UTC)